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초반부는 좋았다. 주인공이나 등장인물 등의 감정 과잉이나 신파는 호불호가 있을거라 생각하지만 나름 신선한 부분도 있었다. 문제는 중반을 넘어갈수록 설정과 구성이 엉성해지고 뇌절을 거듭한다는 거다. 이야기가 자연스럽게 흘러가야하는데 작가가 원하는 장면을 쓰기 위해 등장인물을 꼭두각시처럼 끌고만 가니 점점 작위적인 부분이 많아진다. 설정은 방대하지만 치밀하지 않고 있어 보이는 말을 하지만 깊이가 얕다. 작가가 연애를 라노벨로 배웠는지 그런 부분에서만 특히 라노벨 향이 강해지는 것도 불호였다. 작가의 말을 보면 연참을 많이 한거 같은데 차라리 그 시간에 설정과 이야기를 더 다듬었으면 어땠을까 싶다.
Scud LV.18 작성리뷰 (31)
Sheuuw Sjsi LV.17 작성리뷰 (28)
Sonja K Ortmann LV.9 작성리뷰 (8)
My name is Sonja K Ortmann, I recall encountering a remarkable Spell Caster by the name of DR SARUMAN during my stay in Florida around Orlando last year. Although I was initially uncertain about how his spells worked, I decided to take a chance and contacted him. I requested an instant Love spell, and to my amazement, it worked brilliantly, leaving me thrilled beyond words. In less than 24 hours, my husband had a massive argument with his mistress during their lunch date, left her there, and rushed home to me, filled with remorse and begging for my forgiveness. I am now reunited with my man, and he is entirely devoted and faithful to our marriage. I am eternally grateful to DR SARUMAN for making this possible, and I highly recommend him to anyone searching for a genuine and reliable spell caster. If you're in need of a spell caster who can help you achieve your heart's desires, don't hesitate to contact DR SARUMAN through his Website: https://perfectsolutiontemple.weebly.com, YouTube Link: https://youtu.be/wv5jF27EKIs or email at perfectsolutiontemples@gmail.com Facebook:https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=61560420964460. You can also chat with him directly on WhatsApp at +447477869404 https://wa.me/message/3NZXKYM72HSZO1. Take the first step towards achieving your dreams and contact DR SARUMAN today. because he is the right man to help you get all your spiritual problem solved with his powerful spell also you can reach him for the following spell work:
STROKE CURE
MAKE YOUR LOVER LOVE YOU MORE,
WIN EX BACK,
FRUIT OF THE WOMB,
DIABETES,
REVENGE SPELL,
BUSINESS SPELL,
ATTRACTION SPELL,
LOTTERY SPELL,
MONEY RITUAL,
CANCERS,
COURT CASE...
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김비얌 LV.30 작성리뷰 (85)
그래서 전생검신보다 나은데, 전생검신이 보여줬던 단점도 답습했다.
설정에 잡아먹혀서 캐릭터가 오락가락하는 게 제일 큰 문제.
자다깸 LV.35 작성리뷰 (118)
단탈 LV.42 작성리뷰 (137)
이야기가 자연스럽게 흘러가야하는데 작가가 원하는 장면을 쓰기 위해 등장인물을 꼭두각시처럼 끌고만 가니 점점 작위적인 부분이 많아진다.
설정은 방대하지만 치밀하지 않고 있어 보이는 말을 하지만 깊이가 얕다.
작가가 연애를 라노벨로 배웠는지 그런 부분에서만 특히 라노벨 향이 강해지는 것도 불호였다.
작가의 말을 보면 연참을 많이 한거 같은데 차라리 그 시간에 설정과 이야기를 더 다듬었으면 어땠을까 싶다.
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